Thursday 26 April 2018

The senses sense

Today, we're to write a poem which includes images that engage all five senses. We're challenged to try to be as concrete and exact as possible regarding the "feel" of what the poem invites the reader to see, smell, touch, taste and hear.

Here follows a fitting poem in honour of two of my favourite things, which also form part of this blog's title.


The salty sea foam sweeps the sand,
Leaving pockets and bubbles
on its surface

Waves splash and spray
against rocks

The cool breeze brings
the sweet scent of frangipani
and sticky citrus clings to my fingers
like sea sand to my toes

Cold ice cream
drips from chins
and seagulls cry out
for your dregs

Then the orange sun sets
and all is silent
but the ever tumbling waves 
of the ocean


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