Haibun: A second attempt

We have been challenged once again to write a haibun. I do not think I got it right in my previous attempt. Hopefully, this time I will be closer to being on the mark...

I'll begin with two verses of what I deem to be prose poetry (please correct me if I'm wrong) and end with a haiku.

Grassy knolls and barley fields

roll by unnoticed 

by un-wandering eyes

that only see what is inside

When will we open our eyes 

to the beauty 

of what passes us by

on journeys 

to far off places?

Though trains do not stop

for us to gaze upon small

wonders, we can look