It's rather... abstract

In my desperate attempt to catch-up, I used a prompt in which we are to replace a common noun with an abstract noun to inspire a poem. Once again, here are my efforts...

 

Love like light

 

Loves makes us blink

In the morning of our lives,

We feel its warmth on our skin

 

Love shines brightly

In the midday of our youth,

We often feel its burn

 

Love glows warmly

On the horizon of our age,

As we contemplate the day

 

Love is dimmed

In the night of our time,

Yet never ceases to exist.

 

Andrea Vermaak