Tuesday, 18 April 2017

Neologisms

Our prompt today (I love the prompts!) is to write a poem which incorporates neologisms. Challenge accepted!


The hidden side

 The hidden side
Fustles and furies 
Against the gories,
It shuvvers and shakes
In astonishing meanger

 The hidden side
Bashles and fumps
 Against the slavenemies
To destrend and condembolish
The horrific dischaoster

Andrea Vermaak

P.S. I set out to write a whimsical poem about about a fantasy world at night, but my thoughts soon turned to 'hiding' the terrible things happening in our world in a few ugly neologisms (ironic, yes, I know). My inspiration came from how we often wrestle with our emotions when we see things are not right with the world because we don't know how to fix things, yet we really want to make things right again and help people.

I feel that we ignore the chaos much of the time and perhaps even try to hide it from ourselves because we feel guilty. We bury it in the recesses of our minds because it is too ugly to process, face, or do anything about. 

We hide the atrocities in politically correct words/phrases and polite conversation because we're too afraid to talk about what is really happening. We're too afraid to use those terrible words: war, disease, poverty, starvation, human trafficking, rhino poaching...just in case we're called to make it right, but we don't know how.

Monday, 17 April 2017

Sweet night

Today's prompt is to take inspiration from the nocturne: a melancholy, but light piece of music...


Sweet night

Sweet night, why are you silent?
The wind neither blows, nor rustles
The leaves above me;

The clear sky
Tells of everything but emptiness,
Yet, sweet night, you are still

No birds, or crickets sing,
No water trickles in the stream;
All, sweet night, is quiet

Sweet night, why are you silent?
 You remind me of my loneliness,
Of the thoughtful silence inside me.

Andrea Vermaak
 

Sunday, 16 April 2017

Letter to a friend

Today's prompt is to write a poem inspired by letter writing. It could be addressed to a person, thing, or place. Whom better to address it though than a dear friend whom I miss very much? (This poem is actually addressed to all my friends, scattered all over the world, whom I miss every day.)

I miss

Dear friend of mine so far away
Do you know how much I miss you?
Do you know how much I think about you
And the laughs we had together?

I miss your unsentimental sentimental way
Of telling me you miss me too,
Of how you wish I could also be there
To share new adventures with you.

One day, dear friend, I hope to visit,
Perhaps I'll be fortunate enough to stay,
But until then, I love you, my dear friend
And I miss you every single day.

Andrea Vermaak
 

Saturday, 15 April 2017

The middle

Today's prompt, as we reach the middle of NaPoWriMo, is to write a poem that reflects the nature of being in the middle of something. I know just the focus for my poem. It's rather literal and happens to me on a daily basis...


The middle

 I thought I was focussed
When the phone rang;
It undid me some

The buzz and the rambles
Confused my mind;
When I turned back, it was gone

Yes, I was in the middle of something -
Something important, no less -
Guess now, it will never get done.

Andrea Vermaak

Friday, 14 April 2017

Oscar Wilde

Today's prompt is write a clerihew; a four-line, satirical biographical poem. Mmm, of whom shall I write...Who likes a bit of humour?

Oscar Wilde
Was a rather wild child
Though many do not know
Or perhaps they do, but they don't say so

                                                Andrea Vermaak




Thursday, 13 April 2017

The stars above us

Today's prompt is to write a ghazal. I had not heard of this form until now, so the poem below is my first attempt...


The stars above us

Look up, dear love, at the stars above us
See how they shine, all the stars above us

Some far, some near, but shining in the night
See how they flicker, the stars above us

Some cold, some hot, some new, but some are dead
We'll stay or go to the stars above us

We'll glide and ride and fly among stardust
We'll laugh and dance on the stars above us

And I, Andrea, won't return to you
I'd stay among all the stars above us

Andrea Vermaak

Wednesday, 12 April 2017

Longing...

I don't know what else to say other than I've been inspired (again) by my constant longing to go 'home' to the UK. I spent most of 2008 in Edinburgh, Scotland. From there, I travelled extensively throughout the UK. It changed my life forever and I doubt that I will ever stop thinking about my other (no, not even second; other!) home. 

Some who know me may (read 'do') think I am obsessed, but they were not there. They did not experience what I experienced, nor can anyone, least of all the island itself, ever know how much I long to return (it is my greatest wish and sole ambition).

This is a very personal poem inspired by a very British-sounding song (however silly that may sound) that I just heard in a very British television series that I'm watching again (though the title is inspired by part of the lyrics of another song by the same band, and the band is actually American. Weird, I know; but hey, it works).


You don't know what I go through

I sway to your rhymes,
Writhe in the agony of my memories;
You are too far away

Oh how cursed could one be
To be born of nowhere
Yet long to belong
To you?

You don't know what I go through

The long nights
I ache
I cry

I choke on your melodies,
Shed tears on the pages of your history;
Why are you so far away?
 
If only this cursed land
Would spit me out,
but consume my pain
That I might be free

You don't know what I go through

The burning days
I want to forget
I want to leave behind

You don't  know what I go through

Andrea Vermaak