Showing posts with label emotions. Show all posts
Showing posts with label emotions. Show all posts

Tuesday, 14 April 2020

Inspired

We're challenged today "to write a poem that deals with the poems, poets, and other people who inspired you to write poems." I think this may be a difficult one...Perhaps I'll keep it short.


It can't say that Shakespeare,
nor Elliot,
nor Lawrence
inspired my poems

But love
and fear
and anxiety

War,
sad songs,
and moonlit nights

Fairies
and fantasy
and adventure

Far away places,
friends,
secrets

Long goodbyes
and deep-seated desires,
pain

Above all:
the beauty of words


Andrea Vermaak © 2020

Thursday, 4 April 2019

Sad times

Today's challenge seems to have arrived right on cue. I am feeling rather melancholic and nostalgic this evening, and I was hoping for something in which I could immerse my emotions.

The challenge: to write a sad poem which 'achieves sadness through simplicity.' I will do my best to keep things as simple as possible, but I adore using imagery.

We are further challenged to write a sonnet, but after the draining day I have had, I am gracefully going to bow out of this part of the challenge. If you walked in my shoes today, you would understand.


The Sounds of Sadness

It's in the sound 
of a neighbour playing the piano
on a rainy day

It's in the silent embrace
of friends
as you board the train
and wave goodbye

It's the high notes
of voices
as they sing sad songs

It's a muffled giggle
at a silly photograph
as you remember

It's the unsteady beat
of your broken heart
as you try to forget